Chapter 1. Critiquing a Draft Clearly and Diplomatically

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DOCUMENT ANALYSIS ACTIVITY
Critiquing a Draft Clearly and Diplomatically
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This is an excerpt from the methods section of a report about computer servers. In this section, the writer is explaining the tasks he performed in analyzing different servers. In a later section, he explains what he learned from the analysis. The comments in the balloons were inserted into the document by the author’s colleague.

The following questions ask you to think about techniques for critiquing.

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