Chapter 1. Revising for Conciseness and Simplicity

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Revising for Conciseness and Simplicity
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The following passage is from a request for proposals published by the National Science Foundation. (Sentence numbers have been added here.) The questions below ask you to think about word choice as discussed in this chapter.

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