3. The following résumé was submitted in response to this ad: “CAM Technician to work with other technicians and manage some GIS and mapping projects. Also perform updating of the GIS database. Experience required.” In a brief memo to your instructor, analyze the effectiveness of the résumé. What are some of its problems?
Kenneth Bradley
530 Maplegrove |
Bozeman, Mont. 59715 (406)-484-2916 |
Objective |
Entry level position as a CAM Technician. I am also interested in staying with the company until after graduation, possibly moving into a position as a Mechanical Engineer. |
Education |
Enrolled at Montana State University August 2016-Present |
Employment |
Fred Meyer 65520 Chinden Garden City, MT (208)-323-7030 Janitor- 7/15-6/16 Responsible for cleaning entire store, as well as equipment maintenance and floor maintenance and repair. Assistant Janitorial Manager- 6/16-9/16 |
Responsible for cleaning entire store, equipment maintenance, floor maintenance and repair, scheduling, and managing personnel |
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Head of Freight- 9/16-Present In charge of braking down all new freight, stocking shelves, cleaning the stock room, and managing personnel Montana State University Bozeman, MT Teachers Aide ME 120- 1/15-5/15 Teachers Aide ME 120 In charge of keeping students in line and answering any questions related to drafting. |
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References |
Timothy Rayburn Janitorial Manager (406)-555-8571 Eduardo Perez Coworker (406)-555-2032 |