5. How effective is the following letter of appreciation? How could it be improved? Present your findings in a brief memo to your instructor.

914 Imperial Boulevard

Durham, NC 27708

November 13, 2016

Mr. Ronald O’Shea

Division Engineering

Safeway Electronics, Inc.

Holland, MI 49423

Dear Mr. O’Shea:

Thanks very much for showing me around your plant. I hope I was able to convince you that I’m the best person for the job.

Sincerely yours,

Robert Harad