Chapter Introduction

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FOCUS ON PROCESS: Writing Definitions, Descriptions, and Instructions

Writing Definitions

ANALYZING THE WRITING SITUATION FOR DEFINITIONS

CHOICES AND STRATEGIES: Choosing the Appropriate Type of Definition

WRITING SENTENCE DEFINITIONS

GUIDELINES: Writing Effective Sentence Definitions

WRITING EXTENDED DEFINITIONS

Writing Descriptions

ANALYZING THE WRITING SITUATION FOR DESCRIPTIONS

DRAFTING EFFECTIVE DESCRIPTIONS

GUIDELINES: Providing Appropriate Detail in Descriptions

A LOOK AT SEVERAL SAMPLE DESCRIPTIONS

Writing Instructions

UNDERSTANDING THE ROLE OF INSTRUCTIONAL VIDEOS

DESIGNING A SET OF INSTRUCTIONS

GUIDELINES: Designing Clear, Attractive Pages

PLANNING FOR SAFETY

ETHICS NOTE: Ensuring Your Readers’ Safety

DRAFTING EFFECTIVE INSTRUCTIONS

GUIDELINES: Drafting Introductions for Instructions

GUIDELINES: Drafting Steps in Instructions

REVISING, EDITING, AND PROOFREADING INSTRUCTIONS

A LOOK AT SEVERAL SAMPLE SETS OF INSTRUCTIONS

DOCUMENT ANALYSIS ACTIVITY: Presenting Clear Instructions

DOCUMENT ANALYSIS ACTIVITY: Mechanism Description Using Interactive Graphics and image

DOCUMENT ANALYSIS ACTIVITY: Process Description Using Video Animation and image

DOCUMENT ANALYSIS ACTIVITY: Instructions Using Video Screen Capture and image

DOCUMENT ANALYSIS ACTIVITY: Instructions Using a Combination of Video Demonstration and Screen Capture and image

DOCUMENT ANALYSIS ACTIVITY: Definition Using Video Animation and image

Writing Manuals

WRITER’S CHECKLIST

EXERCISES

CASE 14: Choosing a Medium for Presenting Instructions and image

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THIS CHAPTER DISCUSSES definitions, descriptions, and instructions. The first step is to define these three terms:

  • A definition is typically a brief explanation, using words and sometimes graphics, of what an item is or what a concept means. You could write a definition of file format or of regenerative braking.

  • A description is typically a longer explanation—usually accompanied by graphics—of the physical or operational features of an object, mechanism, or process. You could write a description of a wind turbine, of global warming, or of shale-oil extraction.

  • A set of instructions is a kind of process description, almost always accompanied by graphics, intended to enable a person to carry out a task. You could write a set of instructions for installing a new roof or for using an app on your tablet.

Although each can appear independently, definitions, descriptions, and instructions are often presented together in a set of product information. For instance, a store that sells building materials for homeowners might create a product-information set about how to lay a brick patio. In this set might be definitions of tools (such as a mason’s line), descriptions of objects (such as different types of edging materials, including plastic, metal, masonry, and wood), and step-by-step instructions for planning, laying, and maintaining the patio.

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Regardless of your field, you will write definitions, descriptions, and instructions frequently. Whether you are communicating with other technical professionals, with managers, or with the public, you must be able to define key concepts, describe processes, and explain how to carry out tasks.

FOCUS ON PROCESS: Writing Definitions, Descriptions, and Instructions

In writing definitions, descriptions, and instructions, pay special attention to these steps in the writing process. For a complete process for writing technical documents, see “A Process for Writing Technical Documents” in Ch. 1.

PLANNING For definitions, you will need to decide where to place the definition. Parenthetical and sentence definitions can be placed in the text, in a marginal gloss, in a separate hyperlinked file, in a footnote, or in a glossary (an alphabetized list of definitions). An extended definition can be a section in the body of the larger document or can be placed in an appendix.
DRAFTING For descriptions, you will need to indicate clearly the nature and scope of the description, introduce the description clearly, provide additional detail, and conclude the description. For instructions, you will need to design the instructions based on how your readers will be using them, and you should include appropriate graphics. Do everything you can to ensure readers’ safety.
REVISING If you can, carry out usability testing on any instructions you write.