Exercise 1–2: Eliminating Fragments
Rewrite the following paragraph, eliminating all fragments. Explain why you made each change. Example:
Many people exercise to change their body image. And may become obsessed with their looks. [The second word group is a fragment because it has no subject.]
Many people exercise to change their body image and may become obsessed with their looks. [This revised sentence links the fragment to the rest of the sentence.]
Question
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