2. Comma Splices and Fused Sentences

main clause: A group of words that has both a subject and a verb and can stand alone as a complete sentence: My friends play softball.

See A2 in the Quick Editing Guide for more on editing for comma splices and fused sentences.

Splice two ropes, and you join them into one. Splice two main clauses by putting only a comma between them, however, and you get a faulty construction called a comma splice. Here are two perfectly good main clauses, each separate, each able to stand on its own as a sentence:

The detective wriggled on his belly toward the campfire. The drunken smugglers didn’t notice him.

Splicing those sentences with a comma makes for difficult reading.

COMMA SPLICE The detective wriggled on his belly toward the campfire, the drunken smugglers didn’t notice him.

Even more confusing than a comma splice is a fused sentence: two main clauses joined without any punctuation.

FUSED SENTENCE The detective wriggled on his belly toward the campfire the drunken smugglers didn’t notice him.

Sentence Parts at a Glance

The subject (S) identifies some person, place, thing, situation, or idea.

The predicate (P) includes a verb (expressing action or state of being) and makes an assertion about the subject.

An object (O) is the target or recipient of the action described by the verb.

A complement (C) renames or describes a subject or object.

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Lacking clues from the writer, a reader cannot tell where to pause. To understand the sentence, he or she must halt and reread.

The next two pages show five easy ways to eliminate both comma splices and fused sentences, also called run-ons. Your choice depends on the length and complexity of your main clauses and the effect you desire.

2a Write separate complete sentences to correct a comma splice or a fused sentence
COMMA SPLICE Freud has been called an enemy of sexual repression, the truth is that he is not a friend of free love.
FUSED SENTENCE Freud has been called an enemy of sexual repression the truth is that he is not a friend of free love.

sentence: A word group that includes both a subject and a predicate and can stand alone

Neither sentence yields its meaning without a struggle. To point readers in the right direction, separate the clauses.

SENTENCE Freud has been called an enemy of sexual repression. The truth is that he is not a friend of free love.
2b Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction to correct a comma splice or a fused sentence

If both clauses are of roughly equal weight, you can use a comma to link them — as long as you add a coordinating conjunction after the comma.

coordinating conjunction: A one-syllable linking word (and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet) that joins elements with equal or near-equal importance: Jack and Jill, sink or swim

COMMA SPLICE Hurricane winds hit ninety miles an hour, they tore the roof from every house on Paradise Drive.
SENTENCE Hurricane winds hit ninety miles an hour, and they tore the roof from every house on Paradise Drive.
2c Use a semicolon or a colon to correct a comma splice or a fused sentence

For advice on coordination, see 14a–14c.

A semicolon can connect two closely related thoughts, emphasizing each one.

COMMA SPLICE Hurricane winds hit ninety miles an hour, they tore the roof from every house on Paradise Drive.
SENTENCE Hurricane winds hit ninety miles an hour; they tore the roof from every house on Paradise Drive.

If the second thought illustrates or explains the first, add it with a colon.

SENTENCE The hurricane caused extensive damage: it tore the roof from every house on Paradise Drive.

The only punctuation powerful enough to link two main clauses single-handedly is a semicolon, a colon, or a period. A lone comma won’t do the job except in the case of joining certain very short, similar main clauses.

Jill runs by day, Tom walks by night.

I came, I saw, I conquered.

Commas are not required with short, similar clauses; you can stick with semicolons to join all main clauses, short or long.

Jill runs by day; Tom walks by night.

I came; I saw; I conquered.

2d Use subordination to correct a comma splice or a fused sentence

If one main clause is more important than the other or you want to give it more importance, make the less important one subordinate, which throws weight on the main clause. In effect, you show your reader how one idea relates to another: you decide which matters more.

main clause: A group of words that has both a subject and a verb and can stand alone as a complete sentence: My friends play softball.

See advice on subordination. See a list of subordinating words.

FUSED SENTENCE Hurricane winds hit ninety miles an hour they tore the roof from every house on Paradise Drive.
SENTENCE When hurricane winds hit ninety miles an hour, they tore the roof from every house on Paradise Drive.
SENTENCE Hurricane winds, which tore the roof from every house on Paradise Drive, hit ninety miles an hour.
2e Use a conjunctive adverb with a semicolon and a comma to correct a comma splice or a fused sentence

If you want to cram more than one clause into a sentence, you may join two clauses with a conjunctive adverb. Conjunctive adverbs show relationships such as addition (also, besides), comparison (likewise, similarly), contrast (instead, however), emphasis (namely, certainly), cause and effect (thus, therefore), or time (finally, subsequently). These transitional words and phrases can be a useful way of linking clauses — but only with the right punctuation.

COMMA SPLICE Freud has been called an enemy of sexual repression, however the truth is that he is not a friend of free love.

See a list of conjunctive adverbs.

A writer might consider a comma plus the conjunctive adverb however enough to combine the two main clauses, but that glue won’t hold. Stronger binding — the semicolon along with a comma — is required.

SENTENCE Freud has been called an enemy of sexual repression; however, the truth is that he is not a friend of free love.