Exercise 14–2 Using Subordination
Revise the following sentences, adding subordination where appropriate and removing faulty or excessive subordination. Possible revisions for the lettered sentences appear at the end of the handbook. Example:
Some playwrights like to work with performing theater companies. It is helpful to hear a script read aloud by actors.
Some playwrights like to work with performing theater companies because it is helpful to hear a script read aloud by actors.
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