EXERCISE 20-1 Increasing Sentence Variety
Revise the following passage, adding sentence variety to create interest, emphasize important ideas, and strengthen coherence.
We are terrified of death. We do not think of it, and we don’t speak of death. We don’t mourn in public. We don’t know how to console a grieving friend. In fact, we have eliminated or suppressed all the traditional rituals surrounding death.
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