Ch. 41 Self-Study Exercise 22-1: Choosing an Appropriate Tone and Level of Formality (Lettered Questions)

EXERCISE 22-1 Choosing an Appropriate Tone and Level of Formality

Revise the following passages to ensure that both the tone and the level of formality are appropriate for the topic and audience. Example:

I’m sending you this letter because I want you to meet with me and give me some info about the job you do.

I am writing to inquire about the possibility of an informational interview about your profession.

  1. Question

    Dear Senator Crowley:I think you’ve got to vote for the new environmental law, so I’m writing this letter. We’re messing up forests and wetlands—maybe for good. Let’s do something now for everybody who’s born after us.Thanks,Glenn Turner

  2. Question

    The United States Holocaust Memorial Museum in Washington, D.C., is a great museum dedicated to a real bad time in history. It’s hard not to get bummed out by the stuff on show. Take it from me, it’s an experience you won’t forget.

  3. Question

    Dear Elaine,I am so pleased that you plan on attending the homecoming dance with me on Friday. It promises to be a gala event, and I am confident that we will enjoy ourselves immensely. I understand a local group by the name of Electric Bunny will provide musical entertainment. Please call me at your earliest convenience to inform me when to pick you up.Sincerely,Bill