1. Consider putting the less important idea in a subordinate clause beginning with one of the following words. (See 48e.)
after | before | that | which |
although | even though | unless | while |
as | if | until | who |
as if | since | when | whom |
because | so that | where | whose |
2. Consider putting the less important idea in an appositive phrase. (See 48c.)
3. Consider putting the less important idea in a participial phrase. (See 48b.)