EXERCISE 20–2 Run-on sentences
Example:

Crossing so many time zones on an eight-hour flight, I knew I would be tired when I arrived, however, I was too excited to sleep on the plane.

Possible revision:

Crossing so many time zones on an eight-hour flight, I knew I would be tired when I arrived, but I was too excited to sleep on the plane.

For more help, see section 20.