Review the advice and examples in section 1c for drafting and revising effective thesis statements. Exchange drafts with a classmate and use the problem/strategy approach to evaluate each other’s working thesis. Discuss how each of you might go about revising your thesis statement. What single piece of advice might help you revise and strengthen your thesis? Make notes for yourself in the space below.

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