EXERCISE 9–1 Parallelism

EXERCISE 9–1Parallelism

Edit the following sentences to correct faulty parallelism. Type your answers in the boxes below. Click Save to save your work and return to it. Click Submit to record your activity in your instructor's gradebook. You can also review your response at any time.

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Police dogs are used for finding lost children, tracking criminals, and the detection of bombs and illegal drugs.

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Suggested revision: Police dogs are used for finding lost children, tracking criminals, and detecting bombs and illegal drugs.
EXERCISE 9–1 Parallelism - Edit the following sentences to correct faulty parallelism. Type your answers in the boxes below. Click Save to save your work and return to it. Click Submit to record your activity in your instructor's gradebook. You can also review your response at any time. - Police dogs are used for finding lost children, tracking criminals, and the detection of bombs and illegal drugs.

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Hannah told her rock-climbing partner that she bought a new harness and of her desire to climb Otter Cliffs.

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Suggested revision: Hannah told her rock-climbing partner that she bought a new harness and that she wanted to climb Otter Cliffs.
EXERCISE 9–1 Parallelism - Edit the following sentences to correct faulty parallelism. Type your answers in the boxes below. Click Save to save your work and return to it. Click Submit to record your activity in your instructor's gradebook. You can also review your response at any time. - Hannah told her rock-climbing partner that she bought a new harness and of her desire to climb Otter Cliffs.

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It is more difficult to sustain an exercise program than starting one.

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Suggested revision: It is more difficult to sustain an exercise program than to start one.
EXERCISE 9–1 Parallelism - Edit the following sentences to correct faulty parallelism. Type your answers in the boxes below. Click Save to save your work and return to it. Click Submit to record your activity in your instructor's gradebook. You can also review your response at any time. - It is more difficult to sustain an exercise program than starting one.

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During basic training, I was not only told what to do but also what to think.

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Suggested revision: During basic training, I was told not only what to do but also what to think.
EXERCISE 9–1 Parallelism - Edit the following sentences to correct faulty parallelism. Type your answers in the boxes below. Click Save to save your work and return to it. Click Submit to record your activity in your instructor's gradebook. You can also review your response at any time. - During basic training, I was not only told what to do but also what to think.

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Jan wanted to drive to the wine country or at least Sausalito.

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Suggested revision: Jan wanted to drive to the wine country or at least to Sausalito.
EXERCISE 9–1 Parallelism - Edit the following sentences to correct faulty parallelism. Type your answers in the boxes below. Click Save to save your work and return to it. Click Submit to record your activity in your instructor's gradebook. You can also review your response at any time. - Jan wanted to drive to the wine country or at least Sausalito.