16a. Redundancies

16aEliminate redundancies.

Writers often repeat themselves unnecessarily, thinking that expressions such as cooperate together, yellow in color, or basic essentials add emphasis to their writing. In reality, such redundancies do just the opposite. There is no need to say the same thing twice.

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Though modifiers ordinarily add meaning to the words they modify, occasionally they are redundant.

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The word scribbled already suggests that Sylvia wrote very hurriedly.