EXERCISE 9–6 Parallelism

EXERCISE 9–6Parallelism

Edit each sentence to correct faulty parallelism. When you have finished, click on Submit both to check and to record your answer. Answers may vary.

1 of 10

I quit Weight Watchers not because I didn’t want to continue but my friend stopped going with me.

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I quit Weight Watchers not because I didn’t want to continue but because my friend stopped going with me. For more help, see section 9.
EXERCISE 9–6 Parallelism - 1 of 10: I quit Weight Watchers not because I didn’t want to continue but my friend stopped going with me.

2 of 10

Yoga requires you to stretch muscles slowly, breathe regularly, and you hold each position.

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Yoga requires you to stretch muscles slowly, breathe regularly, and hold each position. For more help, see section 9.
EXERCISE 9–6 Parallelism - 2 of 10: Yoga requires you to stretch muscles slowly, breathe regularly, and you hold each position.

3 of 10

People suffering from diabetes may notice one or more of the following symptoms: blurred vision, itching, weight loss, and they are thirsty.

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People suffering from diabetes may notice one or more of the following symptoms: blurred vision, itching, weight loss, and thirst. For more help, see section 9.
EXERCISE 9–6 Parallelism - 3 of 10: People suffering from diabetes may notice one or more of the following symptoms: blurred vision, itching, weight loss, and they are thirsty.

4 of 10

The babysitter was expected to feed two children, entertain them, take phone messages, and cleaning the kitchen.

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The babysitter was expected to feed two children, entertain them, take phone messages, and clean the kitchen. For more help, see section 9.
EXERCISE 9–6 Parallelism - 4 of 10: The babysitter was expected to feed two children, entertain them, take phone messages, and cleaning the kitchen.

5 of 10

In a week of lessons, Sally taught us not only how to breathe and float but also to do the elementary backstroke, the crawl, and the dog paddle.

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In a week of lessons, Sally taught us not only how to breathe and float but also how to do the elementary backstroke, the crawl, and the dog paddle. For more help, see section 9.
EXERCISE 9–6 Parallelism - 5 of 10: In a week of lessons, Sally taught us not only how to breathe and float but also to do the elementary backstroke, the crawl, and the dog paddle.

6 of 10

Either the directions for assembling the desk had been translated from another language or written by someone who wanted to make me suffer.

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Either the directions for assembling the desk had been translated from another language or they were written by someone who wanted to make me suffer. For more help, see section 9.
EXERCISE 9–6 Parallelism - 6 of 10: Either the directions for assembling the desk had been translated from another language or written by someone who wanted to make me suffer.

7 of 10

Sue and Terry are completing their math homework, Tom is giving Jim directions to his apartment, Steve is catching up on some sleep, and the rest of the students can be seen daydreaming.

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Sue and Terry are completing their math homework, Tom is giving Jim directions to his apartment, Steve is catching up on some sleep, and the rest of the students are daydreaming. For more help, see section 9.
EXERCISE 9–6 Parallelism - 7 of 10: Sue and Terry are completing their math homework, Tom is giving Jim directions to his apartment, Steve is catching up on some sleep, and the rest of the students can be seen daydreaming.

8 of 10

Save your work frequently and you should print out hard copies to protect yourself against computer crashes.

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Save your work frequently and print out hard copies to protect yourself against computer crashes. For more help, see section 9.
EXERCISE 9–6 Parallelism - 8 of 10: Save your work frequently and you should print out hard copies to protect yourself against computer crashes.

9 of 10

The triathlete practiced swimming, bicycling, and she prepared to run a marathon.

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The triathlete practiced swimming, bicycling, and running a marathon. For more help, see section 9.
EXERCISE 9–6 Parallelism - 9 of 10: The triathlete practiced swimming, bicycling, and she prepared to run a marathon.

10 of 10

The smoke blowing up from the valley to the hillside was alarming to both the local residents and to the tourists.

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The smoke blowing up from the valley to the hillside was alarming to both the local residents and the tourists. For more help, see section 9.
EXERCISE 9–6 Parallelism - 10 of 10: The smoke blowing up from the valley to the hillside was alarming to both the local residents and to the tourists.