Exercise 11.12 Thinking critically about constructing arguments

Using Quick Help: Reviewing Your Argument in 11a, analyze a draft of an argument you’ve recently written. Decide what you need to do to revise your argument, and write out a brief plan for revision.

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Using Quick Help: Checklist for constructing an argument, analyze a draft of an argument you’ve recently written. Decide what you need to do to revise your argument, and write out a brief plan for revision.