Reflecting on word choice
Read the following brief poem. What dominant feeling or impression does the poem produce in you? Identify the specific words and phrases that help create that impression.
What happens to a dream deferred?
Like a raisin in the sun?
Does it stink like rotten meat?
—LANGSTON HUGHES, “Harlem (A Dream Deferred)”
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Read the following brief poem. What dominant feeling or impression does the poem produce in you? Identify the specific words and phrases that help create that impression. What happens to a dream deferred? Does it dry up Like a raisin in the sun? Or fester like a sore— And then run? Does it stink like rotten meat? Or crust and sugar over— Like a syrupy sweet? Maybe it just sags Like a heavy load. Or does it explode? —LANGSTON HUGHES, “Harlem (A Dream Deferred)”
Thinking about your own word choice
Choose a description you have written. Note any words that carry strong connotations, and identify the concrete and abstract language as well as any use of figurative language. Revise any inappropriate language you find. What do you notice about the words you chose?
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Choose a description you have written. Note any words that carry strong connotations, and identify the concrete and abstract language as well as any use of figurative language. Revise any inappropriate language you find. What do you notice about the words you chose?