Rewrite each of the following sentences to be more specific and concrete.
The entryway of the building was dirty.
The entryway of the building looked like a garbage dump: paper was littered about, bottles lay shattered, and rotting cantaloupe and chicken parts gave off an unbearable odor.
The sounds at dawn are memorable.
The cheerful early morning sounds of birds outside my window make it easier to get up.
Our holiday dinner tasted good.
The feast at Mom’s on Sunday was delicious as usual: roast chicken, garlic and sage stuffing, sweet garden peas, gravy, and half a fresh-baked apple pie each.
The attendant came toward my car.
The valet stepped toward my Porsche with excitement in her eyes.
I woke up.
My alarm clock clamored insistently until I mustered up the strength to get out of bed and turn it off.