Editing for Consistency and Completeness

• If you find an especially confusing sentence, check to see whether it has a subject and a predicate. If not, revise as necessary. (26a) If you find both a subject and a predicate, and you are still confused, see whether the subject and verb make sense together. (26b)
• Revise any is when, is where, and reason…is because constructions. (26b)

  

• Check all comparisons for completeness. (26e)