Writing Memos

Even in the age of email and microblogs, memos are likely to survive because sometimes writers want a slightly more formal document. Like letters, memos have a characteristic format, which consists of the elements shown in Figure 9.9.

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Figure 9.10: FIGURE 9.9 Identifying Information in a Memo
Figure 9.10: Some organizations prefer the full names of the writer and reader; others want only the first initials and last names. Some prefer job titles; others do not. If your organization does not object, include your job title and your reader’s. The memo will then be informative for anyone who refers to it after either of you has moved on to a new position, as well as for others in the organization who do not know you.

Print the second and all subsequent pages of a memo on plain paper rather than on letterhead. Include three items in the upper right-hand or left-hand corner of each subsequent page: the name of the recipient, the date of the memo, and the page number. See the header in Figure 9.3 on page 247.

Figure 9.10 (on page 254), a sample memo, is a trip report, a record of a business trip written after the employee returned to the office. Readers are less interested in an hour-by-hour narrative of what happened than in a carefully structured discussion of what was important. Although writer and reader appear to be relatively equal in rank, the writer goes to the trouble of organizing the memo to make it easy to read and refer to later.

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Figure 9.11: FIGURE 9.10 Sample Memo

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GUIDELINES: Organizing a Memo

When you write a memo, organize it so that it is easy to follow. Consider these five organizational elements.

  • A specific subject line. “Breast Cancer Walk” is too general. “Breast Cancer Walk Rescheduled to May 14” is better.

  • A clear statement of purpose. As discussed in Chapter 4 (p. 74), the purpose statement is built around a verb that clearly states what you want the readers to know, believe, or do. [[[LP x-ref: As discussed in “Determining Your Purpose in Ch. 4,” the purpose statement is built around a verb that clearly states what you want the readers to know, believe, or do.]]]

  • A brief summary. Even if a memo fits on one page, consider including a summary. For readers who want to read the whole memo, the summary is an advance organizer; for readers in a hurry, reading the summary substitutes for reading the whole memo.

  • Informative headings. Headings make the memo easier to read by enabling readers to skip sections they don’t need and by helping them understand what each section is about. In addition, headings make the memo easier to write because they prompt the writer to provide the kind of information readers need.

  • A prominent recommendation. Many memos end with one or more recommendations. Sometimes these recommendations take the form of action steps: bulleted or numbered lists of what the writer will do or what the writer would like others to do. Here is an example:

    Action Items:

    I would appreciate it if you would work on the following tasks and have your results ready for the meeting on Monday, June 9.

    • Henderson: recalculate the flow rate.

    • Smith: set up meeting with the regional EPA representative for some time during the week of May 13.

    • Falvey: ask Armitra in Houston for his advice.