Revising your conclusion

Writing practice: Revising your conclusion

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Exchange drafts with a classmate and evaluate each other’s conclusion. Ask your classmate to identify the strategy you have used in your conclusion. Did you use a summary, a proposal of action, a recommendation, a statement of wider significance or implications, a redefinition of a key term, a question for further study? Is this strategy effective? If not, what other strategies might be more appropriate for your purpose, audience, and genre? Discuss how each of you might revise your conclusion. Write notes below.

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Exchange drafts with a classmate and evaluate each other’s conclusion. Ask your classmate to identify the strategy you have used in your conclusion. Did you use a summary, a proposal of action, a recommendation, a statement of wider significance or implications, a redefinition of a key term, a question for further study? Is this strategy effective? If not, what other strategies might be more appropriate for your purpose, audience, and genre? Discuss how each of you might revise your conclusion. Write notes below.

Think about what single piece of advice might help you strengthen your conclusion. Then revise your conclusion in the space below.

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Think about what single piece of advice might help you strengthen your conclusion. Then revise your conclusion in the space below.