The student has written in the first person, using both “I” and “we”. Is that decision appropriate or inappropriate for this assignment and topic? Why?
Chapter 6 - Draft - Questions: The student has written in the first person, using both “I” and “we”. Is that decision appropriate or inappropriate for this assignment and topic? Why?
The thesis statement is “closed,” with specification of the essay’s major points clearly identified. As a reader, do you find this type of thesis helpful or limiting?
Chapter 6 - Draft - Questions: The thesis statement is “closed,” with specification of the essay’s major points clearly identified. As a reader, do you find this type of thesis helpful or limiting?
What effect does the figurative language (“the ship that keeps them afloat,” para. 3) have on you as a reader?