Cite three changes Martin has made, and discuss their effect.
Chapter 6 - Revision - Questions: Cite three changes Martin has made, and discuss their effect.
The revised essay is written primarily in the third person. Is this point of view more effective? Why or why not?
Chapter 6 - Revision - Questions: The revised essay is written primarily in the third person. Is this point of view more effective? Why or why not?
Do the sources Martin has chosen help to balance his argument, or do they favor one viewpoint?
Chapter 6 - Revision - Questions: Do the sources Martin has chosen help to balance his argument, or do they favor one viewpoint?
Do the sources give Martin’s voice more authority? If so, explain how. If you do not think so, explain why not. Did he cite his sources properly? How does that affect his authority?
Chapter 6 - Revision - Questions: Do the sources give Martin’s voice more authority? If so, explain how. If you do not think so, explain why not. Did he cite his sources properly? How does that affect his authority?
Is the revision more effective as an argument? Explain your answer, with specific references to the initial draft and the revision.
Chapter 6 - Revision - Questions: Is the revision more effective as an argument? Explain your answer, with specific references to the initial draft and the revision.
Find and read one or more of the sources. Are the quotations and references effective? Would you have made other choices? Why or why not?
Chapter 6 - Revision - Questions: Find and read one or more of the sources. Are the quotations and references effective? Would you have made other choices? Why or why not?