The title is “Revision: Read All Comments Carefully.” The next line reads “Analyze feedback from your instructor and other readers.” Below that line there is an image to the left and text to the right. The image shows a group of seven people discussing a blueprint for a house. The text to the right reads “Ask… What additional questions do you have about the feedback? Which comments are most important and useful? Which comments will point you toward the most improved next draft?” The bottom line reads “Remember: how you respond to suggestions is up to you.”
The title is “Revision: Plan Your Next Draft.” The next line reads “Make big-picture changes.” Below that line there is an image to the left and text to the right. The image shows workers putting together a house frame. The text to the right reads “Ask… Do you need to rethink your purpose or audience? How could you improve your thesis or organization? What other support do you need?” The bottom line reads “Keep working until you have a coherent draft.”
The title is “Revision: Polish Your Draft.” The next line reads “Don’t forget the details.” Below that line there is an image to the left and text to the right. The image shows a woman painting the house and a man planting a tree in front of that house. The text to the right reads “Ask… What does each sentence contribute to your purpose? How can you choose words more effectively? How can you improve your tone or style?” The bottom line reads “Follow appropriate conventions for your genre and audience.”