Thinking critically about comma splices and fused sentences

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Roger Angell is known as a careful and correct stylist, yet he often deviates from the “correct” to create special effects, as in this passage...

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Go through some essays you have written, checking for comma splices and fused sentences. Revise any you find, using one of the methods in this...