Exercise: Revising to make language concrete

EXERCISE 30.5

Rewrite each of the following sentences to be more specific and concrete.

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  1. Question

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    The entryway of the building was dirty.
  2. Question

    pBHX9GYgvrNqBeW8/iUt4Wvq3QDaXIWJgGRX7RiKNU4ejzp6eNWTT0jkSDSEjv5OKnAvw9vueZfORDLh
    The sounds at dawn are memorable.
  3. Question

    Vs40V3KySA0mQuQNpt2rZxr0QlZYAC9Znnd0cpqBFGyntwHTAYouji8ji4l/7zGmMnBeOchlJB0V0SIP
    Our holiday dinner tasted good.
  4. Question

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    The attendant came toward my car.
  5. Question

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    I woke up.