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Erin Blaine
Professor Adams
Humanities 101
4 March 2015
Should Data Posted on Social-
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Not everyone is happy with this practice, though, and some have strong objections. Becca Bush, a college student in Chicago, argues that employers should not have the right to use social media to evaluate potential employees. “It’s a violation of privacy,” she says. “Twenty years ago, people still did the same things as now,” but the information “wasn’t as widespread” (qtd. in Cammenga). Marc S. Rotenberg, president of the Electronic Privacy Information Center, agrees, saying, “Employers should not be judging what people in their private lives do away from the workplace” (qtd. in Preston). Rotenberg goes on to say that privacy settings on sites like Facebook are often misunderstood. According to him, “People are led to believe that there is more limited disclosure than there actually is” (qtd. in Preston). Some people mistakenly think that looking at an applicant’s Facebook page is illegal (Cammenga). Even though it is not, this practice can lead to discrimination, which is illegal. An online search can reveal characteristics that an applicant is not required to disclose to employers—
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Given the realities of the digital age, however, admissions committees and job recruiters are acting reasonably when they access social-
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Part of the problem is that the Internet has fundamentally altered our notions of “private” and “public” in ways that we are only just beginning to understand. As Shelley Fralic observes in “Don’t Fall for the Myths about Online Privacy,” Facebook’s privacy options do not really protect its users’ privacy, and thinking they do “is beyond absurd” (1). On sites like Facebook, people can reveal intimate details of their lives to millions of strangers. This situation is unprecedented and, at least for the foreseeable future, irreversible. As New York Times columnist Thomas L. Friedman observes, “When everyone has a blog, a MySpace page, or Facebook entry, everyone is a publisher. . . . When everyone is a publisher, paparazzo, or filmmaker, everyone else is a public figure.” Given the changes in our understanding of privacy and the public nature of the Internet, the suggestion that we should live our lives by the same rules we lived by twenty years ago simply does not make sense. As Friedman notes, in the Internet age, more and more of “what you say or do or write will end up as a digital fingerprint that never gets erased” (23).
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Rather than relying on outdated notions of privacy, students and job seekers should accept these new conditions and take steps to protect themselves. Most college and career counseling services have easy-
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The most important way for people to protect themselves against the possible misuse of personal information is for them to take responsibility for the information they post online. According to a recent article in Education Week, even middle school students should keep their future college and career plans in mind when they post information online (“Online Behavior”). In preparing students to apply for college, many high school counselors stress the “golden rule”: “students should never post anything online they wouldn’t want their parents to see” (“Online Behavior”). Students and job seekers must realize that a commonsense approach to the Internet requires that they develop good “digital grooming” habits (Bond). For example, one self-
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However, one third (33 percent) of employers who research candidates on social networking sites say they’ve found content that made them more likely to hire a candidate. What’s more, nearly a quarter (23 percent) found content that directly led to them hiring the candidate, up from 19 percent last year. (“Number of Employers”)
In today’s job market, people should think of their networks as extensions of themselves. They need to take an active role in shaping the image they want to project to future employers.
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As Thomas L. Friedman argues in his column, “The Whole World Is Watching,” access to information creates opportunities as well as problems. Quoting Dov Seidman, Friedman maintains that the most important opportunity may be the one to “out-
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Works Cited
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Bond, Michaelle. “Facebook Timeline a New Privacy Test.” USA Today, 2 Nov. 2011, www.usatoday.com/
Cammenga, Michelle. “Facebook Might Be the Reason You Don’t Get That Job.” Hub Bub, Loyola University Chicago’s School of Communication, 23 Feb. 2012, blogs.luc.edu/
Fralic, Shelley. “Don’t Fall for the Myths about Online Privacy.” Calgary Herald, 17 Oct. 2015, p. 1.
Friedman, Thomas L. “The Whole World Is Watching.” The New York Times, 27 June 2007, p. A23.
Loveland, Mariel. “Reppler Launches ‘Reppler Image Score,’ Rates Social Network Profile Content for Potential Employers.” Scribbal, 27 Sept. 2011, www.scribbal.com/
Be sure that your data comes from recent sources.
“Number of Employers Passing on Applicants Due to Social Media Posts Continues to Rise.” CareerBuilder, 26 June 2014, www.careerbuilder.com/
“Online Behavior Jeopardizing College Plans; Admissions Officers Checking Social-
Preston, Jennifer. “Social Media History Becomes a New Job Hurdle.” The New York Times, 20 July 2011, www.nytimes.com/
“Using Social Networking in Your Employment Search.” University Career Services, Northwestern University, 2011, www.northwestern.edu/