The following student essay contains all the elements of an ethical argument. The student takes the position that colleges should do more to help nontraditional students succeed.
ARE COLLEGES DOING ENOUGH FOR NONTRADITIONAL STUDENTS?
CHRIS MUÑOZ
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Ethical principle established
Thesis statement
Colleges and universities are experiencing an increase in the number of nontraditional students, and this number is projected to rise. Although these students enrich campus communities and provide new opportunities for learning, they also present challenges. Generally, nontraditional students are older, attend school part-
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Background: Gives an overview of the situation
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Most people’s assumptions about who is enrolled in college are out of date. According to the educational policy scholar Frederick Hess, only 15 percent of all undergraduates attend a four-
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Ethical analysis: Presents the ethical principle and analyzes the situation on the basis of this principle
Most people would agree that diversity is highly valued on college campuses. In fact, most universities go to great lengths to admit a diverse group of students—
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Evidence: First point in support of the thesis
To ensure the fair treatment of nontraditional students, colleges need to remove the barriers those students face. One of the first barriers that nontraditional students face is difficulty gaining access to classes and student services. Academic schedules, including the academic calendar and class times, frequently exclude working adults and parents. As Frederick Hess explains, “A semester system . . . works well for 19-
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Evidence: Second point in support of the thesis
Schools also need to stop devaluing the kinds of programs in which nontraditional students tend to enroll. Research shows that the reasons older students want to continue their educations “indicate high motivation and commitment, but require accommodations to instruction” (Newman, Deyoe, and Seelow 107). Many are taking courses in order to return to work, change careers, or improve their chances for a promotion. According to Hess, although the greatest demand is for associate’s degrees, over 50 percent of nontraditional students are seeking “subbaccalaureate” certification credentials. As Hess demonstrates, certification programs are considered to be marginal, even in community colleges. One reason for this situation is that most schools still judge their own worth by factors—
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Evidence: Third point in support of thesis
Finally, universities need to do more to encourage inclusive teaching approaches. According to Joshua L. Carreiro and Brian P. Kapitulik, most educators assume their students are “traditional”—that they are recent high school graduates from middle-
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Refutation of opposing arguments
Not everyone believes that colleges and universities need to change their basic assumptions about education. They concede that nontraditional students might need extra support, but they say that these students are adults and should be able to fend for themselves. Students’ commitments outside of school—
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Concluding statement
According to Hermida, many of today’s students are nontraditional (20). Most of the current research suggests that inclusion is their most pressing concern. As this population continues to grow, say Newman, Deyoe, and Seelow, educators should focus on offering “clear objectives, direct ties to life experience, and multiple opportunities” for nontraditional students to engage in the college community (122). Giving preferential treatment to some students while ignoring the needs of others is ethically wrong, so schools need to work harder to end discrimination against this increasingly large group of learners.
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Works Cited
Carreiro, Joshua L., and Brian P. Kapitulik. “Budgets, Board Games, and Make Believe: The Challenge of Teaching Social Class Inequality with Nontraditional Students.” American Sociologist, vol. 41, no. 3, Oct. 2010, pp. 232–
Hermida, Julian. “Inclusive Teaching: An Approach for Encouraging Nontraditional Student Success.” International Journal of Research and Review, vol. 5, no. 1, Oct. 2010, pp. 19–
Hess, Frederick. “Old School: College’s Most Important Trend Is the Rise of the Adult Student.” The Atlantic, 28 Sept. 2011, www.theatlantic.com/
Muhammad, Jacqueline. “New Coordinator to Address Nontraditional Student Needs.” Daily Egyptian, Southern Illinois University, Carbondale, 8 Dec. 2011, archives.dailyegyptian.com/
Newman, Dianna L., Meghan Morris Deyoe, and David Seelow. “Serving Nontraditional Students: Meeting Needs through an Online Writing Program.” Models for Improving and Optimizing Online and Blended Learning in Higher Education, edited by Jared Keengwe and Joachim Jack Agamba, IGI Global, 2015, pp. 106–
Tripp, Alan. “Guest Post: Nontraditional Students Key to College Completion Goal.” Washington Post, 25 Mar. 2011, www.washingtonpost.com/
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Subordination and Coordination
When you write an argumentative essay, you need to show readers the logical and sequential connections between your ideas. You do this by using coordinating conjunctions and subordinating conjunctions—words that join words, phrases, clauses, or entire sentences. Be sure to choose conjunctions that accurately express the relationship between the ideas they join.
Coordinating conjunctions—and, but, for, nor, or, so, and yet—join ideas of equal importance. In compound sentences, they describe the relationship between the ideas in the two independent clauses and show how these ideas are related.
“Colleges and universities are experiencing an increase in the number of nontraditional students, and this number is projected to rise.” (And indicates addition.) (para. 1)
“These students have a lot to offer, but often they don’t feel included.” (But indicates contrast or contradiction.) (3)
Subordinating conjunctions—after, although, because, if, so that, where, and so on—
“Although these students enrich campus communities and provide new opportunities for learning, they also present challenges.” (Although indicates a contrast.) (1)
“Although many schools recognize that nontraditional students have unique needs, most schools ignore these needs and unfairly continue to focus on the ‘typical’ student.” (Although indicates a contrast.) (1)
“As long as these barriers to equal access exist, nontraditional students will always be ‘second-
“If instructors want to be more inclusive, they can acknowledge diversity by engaging students in diverse ways of thinking and learning.” (If indicates condition.) (6)
For more practice, see the LearningCurve on Coordination and Subordination within this LaunchPad.