Correcting Various Fragments

1. With the high cost of producing video games. Game publishers are turning to a new source of revenue.
   1. Game publishers are turning to a new source of revenue, with the high cost of producing video games.
   2. With the high cost of producing video games, game publishers are turning to a new source of revenue.
   3. With the high cost of producing video games: Game publishers are turning to a new source of revenue.

1. Question 1.41

   To add to their income. Publishers are placing advertisements in their games.

   A.

   a. To add to their income, publishers are placing advertisements in their games.

   B.

   b. Publishers are placing advertisements in their games; to add to their income.

   C.

   c. To add to their income publishers, are placing advertisements in their games.

2. Question 1.42

   Sometimes, the ads show a character using a product. For example, drinking a specific brand of soda to earn health points.

   A.

   a. For example, drinking a specific brand of soda to earn health points sometimes, the ads show a character using a product.

   B.

   b. Sometimes, the ads show a character using a product; for example, drinking a specific brand of soda to earn health points.

   C.

   c. Sometimes, for example, drinking a specific brand of soda, the ads show a character using a product.

3. Question 1.43

   One character, a race-car driver, drove his ad-covered car. Across the finish line.

   A.

   a. Across the finish line one character, a race-car driver, drive his ad-covered car.

   B.

   b. One character, a race-car driver, drove his ad-covered car: across the finish line.

   C.

   c. One character, a race-car driver, drove his ad-covered car across the finish line.

4. Question 1.44

   When a warrior character picked up a sword decorated with an athletic-shoe logo. Some players complained.

   A.

   a. When a warrior character picked up a sword decorated with an athletic-shoe logo, some players complained.

   B.

   b. Some players complained; when a warrior character picked up a sword decorated with an athletic-shoe logo.

   C.

   c. When a warrior character picked up a sword decorated with an athletic-shoe logo; some players complained.

5. Question 1.45

   Worried that ads are distracting. Some publishers are trying to limit the number of ads per game.

   A.

   a. Worried that ads are distracting; some publishers are trying to limit the number of ads per game.

   B.

   b. Worried that ads are distracting, some publishers are trying to limit the number of ads per game.

   C.

   c. Some publishers are trying to limit the number of ads per game worried that ads are distracting.

6. Question 1.46

   But most players do not seem to mind seeing ads in video games. If there are not too many of them.

   A.

   a. But most players do not seem to mind seeing ads in video games if there are not too many of them.

   B.

   b. But most players do not seem to mind seeing ads in video games: if there are not too many of them.

   C.

   c. If there are not too many of them but most players do not seem to mind seeing ads in video games.

7. Question 1.47

   These players are used to seeing ads in all kinds of places. Like grocery carts and restroom walls.

   A.

   a. These players are used to seeing ads in all kinds of places; like grocery carts and restroom walls.

   B.

   b. Like grocery carts and restroom walls, these players are used to seeing ads in all kinds of places.

   C.

   c. These players are used to seeing ads in all kinds of places, like grocery carts and restroom walls.

8. Question 1.48

   For video game publishers. The goal is making a profit, but most publishers also care about the product.

   A.

   a. For video game publishers; the goal is making a profit, but most publishers also care about the product.

   B.

   b. For video game publishers, the goal is making a profit, but most publishers also care about the product.

   C.

   c. The goal is making a profit, but most publishers also care about the product for video game publishers.

9. Question 1.49

   To strike a balance between profitable advertising and high game quality. That is what publishers want.

   A.

   a. To strike a balance between profitable advertising and high game quality that is what publishers want.

   B.

   b. That is what publishers want: to strike a balance between profitable advertising and high game quality.

   C.

   c. To strike a balance between profitable advertising and high game quality; that is what publishers want.

10. Question 1.50

    Doing market research. Will help publishers find that balance.

    A.

    a. Doing market research will help publishers find that balance.

    B.

    b. Doing market research, will help publishers find that balance.

    C.

    c. Doing market research: will help publishers find that balance.