Correcting Dangling Modifiers

For each of the following sentences, choose the revision that best addresses the dangling modifier. If a sentence needs no revision, choose Correct.

For help with this exercise, see chapter 28 of Real Essays 5e.

Example

  1. When selling a used car, a resale will bring a better price than a trade-in.
    1. When selling a used car, the owner will get a better price for a resale than a trade-in.
    2. A resale will bring a better price than a trade-in when selling a used car.
    3. Correct
  1. Question 1.583

    When trading in a used car, a buyer will offer a better price if the car is clean.

    A.
    B.
    C.

  2. Question 1.584

    Hiring a professional detailer, a used car can be given a more polished appearance.

    A.
    B.
    C.

  3. Question 1.585

    Looking like new, the owner can get the best price for a trade-in or a resale.

    A.
    B.
    C.

  4. Question 1.586

    With essential repairs completed, a used car should be in good working order to be sold.

    A.
    B.
    C.

  5. Question 1.587

    Approved as safe and drivable by a reputable mechanic, minor mechanical problems may not have to be fixed.

    A.
    B.
    C.

  6. Question 1.588

    To win points for honesty, prospective buyers should know about a used car’s minor problems.

    A.
    B.
    C.

  7. Question 1.589

    By deducting the cost of minor repairs from the asking price, a buyer can be fair with the owner.

    A.
    B.
    C.

  8. Question 1.590

    No matter how expensive, decorative lighting and other details usually do not add to the value of a car.

    A.
    B.
    C.

  9. Question 1.591

    With higher than usual mileage, the owner may have to reduce the asking price.

    A.
    B.
    C.

  10. Question 1.592

    Advertising in a local newspaper, a used car is likely to reach the target market.

    A.
    B.
    C.