Practice 3: Writing Thesis Statements That Fit the Size of the Assignment

PRACTICE 3 Writing Thesis Statements That Fit the Size of the Assignment

Read the following thesis statements, and decide whether they are too broad, too narrow, or the right size for a short essay. Rewrite statements that are too broad or too narrow to better fit the size of the assignment. For statements that are the right size, write “OK.”

EXAMPLE:

 My dog will be ten years old next month.

BROADER:

 Dogs make excellent pets because they are social, loyal, and affectionate.
  1. Hinduism is a fascinating religion.

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    Practice 3: Thesis Statement 1
  2. I love food.

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    Practice 3: Thesis Statement 2
  3. Being a vegetarian offers a wide range of healthy food choices.

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  4. There are many vegetarians in this country.

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  5. Another gourmet coffee shop opened last week, the third one on a single block.

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