Writing Assignment and Checklist: Revising Your Essay

Revise an essay using the draft you developed earlier in this chapter. Before revising, read the following checklist.

CHECKLIST

Revising Your Essay

FOCUS

  • After a break, reread your draft with a fresh perspective.

ASK

  • What is your point or position? Does your thesis statement clearly state your main point?
  • Does your essay have the following?

    — An introductory paragraph

    — Three or more body paragraphs

    — A topic sentence for each paragraph that supports the main point

    — A forceful concluding paragraph that reminds readers of the main point and makes an observation

  • Does your essay have unity?

    — Do all of the support points relate directly to the main point?

    — Do all of the supporting details in each body paragraph relate to the paragraph’s topic sentence?

    — Have you avoided drifting away from the main point?

  • Do you have enough support?

    — Taken together, do the topic sentences of each paragraph give enough support or evidence for the main point?

    — Do individual paragraphs support their topic sentences?

    — Would more detail strengthen your support?

  • Is your essay coherent?

    — Have you used transitional words to link ideas?

    — Have you used transitional sentences to link paragraphs?

REVISE

  • Revise your draft, making any improvements you can. Be sure to look for bias or errors in reasoning.