Revise an essay using the draft you developed earlier in this chapter. Before revising, read the following checklist.
Revising Your Essay
FOCUS
ASK
— An introductory paragraph
— Three or more body paragraphs
— A topic sentence for each paragraph that supports the main point
— A forceful concluding paragraph that reminds readers of the main point and makes an observation
— Do all of the support points relate directly to the main point?
— Do all of the supporting details in each body paragraph relate to the paragraph’s topic sentence?
— Have you avoided drifting away from the main point?
— Taken together, do the topic sentences of each paragraph give enough support or evidence for the main point?
— Do individual paragraphs support their topic sentences?
— Would more detail strengthen your support?
— Have you used transitional words to link ideas?
— Have you used transitional sentences to link paragraphs?
REVISE