Read Michelle Nguyen’s rough draft and revision goals in 2d and her final draft in 2h. With your classmates, discuss Nguyen’s revision process. Notice what Nguyen learned from her peers’ comments. How did her revision goals focus her revision? What three or four significant changes did she make to strengthen her final draft? Write a brief response below. What do you learn from studying and discussing Nguyen’s writing process?

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