The next two student essays argue about the wisdom of using social media, like Facebook and Twitter, as educational aids in college. Read both essays, and answer the questions after the second one.
Student Argument Essay 1
Jason Yilmaz
A Learning Tool Whose Time Has Come
Vocabulary development
incorporate: to add; to bring into
objection: an argument against something
distractions: things that draw attention away from something else
engage: to become involved in
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Efforts to incorporate social media into courses at our college have drawn several complaints. A major objection is that Facebook and Twitter are distractions that have no place in the classroom. Based on my own experiences, I must completely disagree. Social media, when used intelligently, will get students more involved with their courses and help them be more successful in college.
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In the first place, social media can help students engage deeply with academic subjects. For example, in a sociology class that I took in high school, the instructor encouraged students to use Twitter in a research assignment. This assignment called for us to record, over one week, the number of times we observed students of different races and ethnic groups interacting outside of the classroom. Each of us made observations in the lunch room, in the courtyard where students liked to hang out between classes, and in other public areas. We tweeted our findings as we did our research, and in the end, we brought them together to write a group report. The Twitter exchanges gave each of us new ideas and insights. Also, the whole process helped us understand what a research team does in the real world.
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In the second place, social media are a good way for students to get help and support outside of class. As a commuter student with a job, it is hard for me to get to my instructors’ office hours, let alone meet with other students. Therefore, I would value Facebook groups that would let me post questions about assignments and other homework and get responses from instructors and other students. Also, I would be able to form online study groups with classmates.
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Finally, social networking can make students feel more confident and connected. In the sociology course where I used Twitter, I found that other students valued and respected the information that I shared, just as I valued their contributions. Also, all of us felt like we were “in this together” — an uncommon experience in most classrooms. I have heard that feeling connected to other students and to the larger college community can make people less likely to drop out, and I believe it.
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New things often scare people, and the use of social media in education is no exception. However, I would hate to see fears about social media get in the way of efforts to make students more engaged with and successful in college. We owe it to students to overcome such fears.
Student Argument Essay 2
Shari Beck
A Classroom Distraction—
Vocabulary development
spell: a state of being enchanted or fascinated by something
initiative: a program or process
compromise: to interfere with
savvy: knowledgeable or sophisticated
plagiarism: using other people’s words as your own
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Last week, I saw the campus newspaper’s story about new efforts to incorporate Twitter, Facebook, and other social media into courses. What did I think about these efforts? To get my answer, I only had to lower the newspaper. Across the table from me was my fourteen-
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As you might have guessed already, my answer to my own question is this: Making social media part of a college education is a terrible idea, for a whole lot of reasons.
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One reason is the distraction factor, illustrated by my phone-
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Another reason I am opposed to social media in education is that students’ postings on Facebook or Twitter might compromise their privacy. I am not confident that all teachers will educate students about the importance of limiting the personal information that they make available in public forums. Tech-
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My biggest concern is that students will use social media to cheat. According to proponents of the social-
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From where I sit — once again, across the table from my phone-
What is the thesis statement in each student essay?
List the reasons for the position taken in each essay.
Does each essay follow the Four Basics of Good Argument (see “Understand What Argument Is”)? Give examples to support your answer.
Write down at least one additional support point / reason that one of the authors might have included. Then, describe the types of evidence that could be used to back up this support point.