A good topic sentence or thesis statement is forceful. Do not say you will make a point; just make it. Do not say “I think.” Just state your point.
| WEAK | In my opinion, everyone should exercise. |
| FORCEFUL | Everyone should exercise to reduce stress, maintain a healthy weight, and feel better overall. |
| WEAK | I think student fees are much too high. |
| FORCEFUL | Student fees need to be explained and justified. |