When you revise a paper, look carefully at the support you have developed. Will readers have enough information to understand and be convinced by the main point?

In the margin or between the lines of your draft (which should be double-spaced), note ideas that seem weak or unclear. As you revise, build up your support by adding more details.

In the example below, the main point has been double-underlined and notes have been made in the margins to suggest revision ideas for improved support.