W1-a Eliminate or rewrite redundant expressions.

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The phrase blue in color is redundant because it repeats obvious information. Expressions such as past memories, advance planning, and mix together include modifiers that repeat information already provided in the word modified. Expressions such as the fact is true and in my opinion, I believe are redundant because they contain obvious implications.

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Delete extra words from a redundant or repetitive sentence.

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