Exercise 5.3 Reflecting on essay development

EXERCISE 5.3

Copy and paste in a few paragraphs from the middle of an essay you have written recently. Does each have a topic sentence or strongly imply one? Do all the other sentences in the paragraph focus on its main idea? Would you now revise any of these paragraphs—and, if so, how?

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Copy and paste in a few paragraphs from the middle of an essay you have written recently. Does each have a topic sentence or strongly imply one? Do all the other sentences in the paragraph focus on its main idea? Would you now revise any of these paragraphs—and, if so, how?