EXTRA CREDIT YOU CAN LIVE WITHOUT
Anna Martinez
California State University–
Anna Martinez selected student credit card debt as the topic of her persuasive speech. Based on her survey of the audience, she determined that it would not be feasible to argue that students should not use credit cards. She selected a different thesis that was within their latitude of acceptance—
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Anna’s speech is targeted to an audience of college students, and she refers to information gleaned from her survey to support her points. Anna consistently uses evidence to support her claims, and she has organized her speech in the problem-
• Suspense-
There is a dangerous product on our campus. It is marketed on tables outside the student union and advertised on the bulletin board in this classroom. Based on my audience survey, it is likely that most of you have this product in your possession right now. By the end of my speech, this product may be costing you more than it is right now. This dangerous product is credit cards. •
Today I would like to discuss the problems created by college students’ credit cards and hopefully persuade you to be a careful credit card consumer. If your credit card situation is anything like mine—
My husband and I paid for our own wedding. More accurately, we used our credit cards to charge many of our wedding expenses. And thanks to Visa, we are still paying for our wedding every month! We have saved money with some of the suggestions I will present today, and you can do the same.
• Anna includes her thesis, connects with the audience, establishes credibility, and previews her main points.
To that end, let’s cover some of the problems created by students’ credit card debt, then analyze causes of the problem, and finally consider steps you can take to be a careful credit card consumer. •
We’ll start with a look at the problems created by these “hazardous products.”
• Anna consistently uses research sources to support her points.
Credit card debt on campus is a significant and growing problem. Many students have credit card debt. According to Matthew Scott, in Black Collegian, April 2007, “College financial aid provider Nellie Mae reported that 76 percent of undergraduate students had credit cards in 2005, with an average balance of $2,169. An alarming 25 percent of undergraduates had credit card balances totaling $3,000 or more.” In Business Week, September 5, 2007, Jessica Silver-
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• Supporting material: examples
High credit card use can change our lives for the worse. According to the April 2007 Black Collegian article, Rhonda Reynolds of Bernard Baruch College built up $8,000 worth of debt and was unable to make even the minimum payment. Her account went into collections. Business Week, March 15, 1999, provided another example: Jason Britton, a senior at Georgetown University, accumulated $21,000 in debt over four years on sixteen cards! Jason reports, “When I first started, my attitude was ‘I’ll get a job after college to pay off all my debt.’” Then he realized that he was in a hole because he could not meet his minimum monthly payments. He had to obtain financial assistance from his parents and now works three part-
You probably do not owe $20,000 on your credit cards, but even smaller balances take their toll. Robert Frick, associate editor for Kiplinger’s Personal Finance magazine, March 1997, states that if you make the minimum payments on a $500 balance at an 18 percent interest rate, it will take over seven years to pay off the loan and cost $365 in interest.
High credit card debt can also haunt your finances after you graduate. Matthew Scott, previously cited, notes that credit bureaus assign you a credit score, which is “your economic report card to the rest of the world.” That score will “determine the interest rates you pay for many forms of credit and insurance.” He also notes that prospective employers will check your credit score and use that number to decide whether or not you are responsible.
• Relating the problem to a college audience
Many people in this class are carrying student loans, which will need to be paid back upon graduation. When you add credit card debt to student loan payments, rent, utilities, food, the payment on the new car you want to buy, family expenses, and so on, the toll can be heavy. Alan Blair, director of credit management for the New England Educational Loan Marketing Corporation, in a 1998 report on the corporation’s Web site, notes serious consequences for students who cannot balance monthly expenses and debts, including “poor credit ratings, inability to apply for car loans or a mortgage, collection activity, and at worst, a bankruptcy filing.” •
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Don’t let this happen to you. After all that hard work earning a degree and finally landing a job where you don’t have to wear a plastic name tag and induce people to get “fries with that order,” the last thing any of us needs is to be spending our hard-
• Transition to main point II
Credit card debt is hazardous to students’ financial health, so why are these debts piling up? Let’s move on to the causes of this problem. •
The reality is that credit card issuers want and aggressively seek the business of students like ourselves. As Jessica Silver-
• Supporting material: explanation of why card issuers market to students
Card issuers actually troll for customers on campus because student business is profitable. Daniel Eisenberg, writer of the Your Money column for Time magazine, September 28, 1998, notes that “college students are suckers for free stuff, and many are collecting extra credit cards and heavier debts as a result.” Eisenberg refers to a U.S. Public Interest Research Group survey, which found that students who sign up for cards at campus tables in return for “gifts” typically carry higher unpaid balances than do other students. Jessica Silver-
Companies use “sucker rates” to induce students to apply for credit. Business Week, March 15, 1999, writes that “credit card marketers may advertise a low annual percentage rate, but it often jumps substantially after three to nine months. First USA’s student Visa has a 9.9% introductory rate that soars to 17.99% after five months. Teaser rates aren’t unique to student cards, but a 1998 study by the Washington-
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So it appears that credit card companies will not stop demanding student business any time soon. What can we do about it?
My proposed solution is to be a careful credit card consumer.
• Anna notes that her listeners are likely to reject her strongest suggestion. She then advocates a solution within her audience’s latitude of acceptance.
Why not get rid of your credit cards before it’s too late? All right, maybe you won’t go for that solution. My survey indicated that most of you enjoy the flexibility in spending that credit cards provide. •
So here are some other ways you should be credit card smart. One practice is to shop carefully for the best credit card deals. The companies that are not spending their money giving away pizzas and iPods on campus may be able to offer you a better deal. In her September 7, 2007, Business Week article, Silver-
A second solution is to read the fine print on credit card applications to learn what your actual interest rate will be. Alison Barros, a staff writer for the Lane Community College Torch, October 29, 1998, quotes Jonathan Woolworth, consumer protection director for the Oregon Public Interest Research Group, who wrote that “students need to read the fine print and find out how long those low interest rates last. Rates that are as low as 3% can jump to 18% within three months, and the credit card company doesn’t want the student to know that.”
• Anna shows a visual aid here.
Here is an example of the fine print on an ad that begins at 1.9 percent and soon rises. If you read the fine print, you note that the rate can rise to more than 20 percent. •
• Second and third are examples of signposts.
• Adapting the solution to a college audience
Third, even if you can only make the minimum payment on your cards, pay your bills on time. • Silver-
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Finally, you can keep money in your pocket and out of the credit card company’s by paying attention to your credit report. If any agencies are “talking trash” about you with inaccurate information, be sure to have it corrected.
• Internal summary of main point III
To sum up these solutions, even if you do not want to stop using credit cards, there are many ways to be a careful credit card consumer. Shop for a good rate, and be careful to read the fine print so you know what the rate really is. Know what you owe, and take the responsibility to make payments on time. •
• Summary of main points
This morning, we have learned about a hazardous product on campus—
• The clincher sums up Anna’s speech with irony.
If your instructor offers you a chance for extra credit in his or her class, take advantage of the opportunity. But when a credit card issuer offers you a free T-