SAMPLE PERSUASIVE SPEECH
RECLAIMING PUBLIC SPACES FOR THE EMPOWERMENT OF WOMEN AND GIRLS
Michelle Bachelet
Michelle Bachelet, former executive director of UN Women (2010–
Ladies and gentlemen,
• Here Bachelet gives a precise topic statement.
• This sentence lists the ways that women should be able to occupy a public space. Each example reinforces and explains the main topic statement.
I am pleased to be with you as we gather to talk about a subject critical to the well-
Violence against women and girls takes place every day in public spaces around the globe. Most cases, however, remain hidden—
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You heard me say it before—
And it’s not just happening in the evening. It happened last month when Kepari Leniata, a twenty-
• In this paragraph (and the ones before it), the speaker offers examples of women around the world who paid a price for trying to occupy a public space. These examples qualitatively enrich the significance of her claims.
And it happens everywhere! More than 1 million women are stalked in the United States each year. Women and girls are kidnapped and sold into sexual slavery in Europe. Indigenous women disappear along British Columbia’s notorious Route 16, now called “the Highway of Tears.” •
Instead of letting ourselves be overwhelmed by the staggering number of these incidents, instead of being paralyzed by the heart-
• This comes across as a clear action step. It is direct and memorable.
Let us speak; let us act; let us rise. •
• Here the use of words like our and us allow the speaker to suggest common ground with her audience.
Events like our being together today allow us to share our experiences, our ideas, and our recommendations to aid women and girls, our fellow human beings at risk around the world. • If I have one hope, it is that when you leave this room after our meeting you are determined to take ACTION—
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We find ourselves at a unique global moment and opportunity. The momentum is there to break through the barriers to ending sexual violence and harassment in public spaces. Research sponsored by the UN Safe Cities Global Initiative, for example, reveals that women and girls identify sexual harassment and fear of violence in public spaces as inhibiting their lives, and they are ready to break their silence about it and collectively move to action. At UN Women, we are committed to working with the members of this panel, the members of this audience, and all people of goodwill to bring experiences, diverse resources, and determination to the table to maximize our impact and serve as a catalyst for change.
UN Women works collaboratively with UN-
New cities are joining in our work all the time—
• By including examples of solutions from around the world, the speaker offers a symmetry to her earlier examples of problems from around the world.
And the Safe Cities program is already making a difference. In Quito, Ecuador, for example, women were encouraged to break the silence about their experiences through a public awareness letter-
In Rio de Janeiro, it’s making a difference through the use of mapping technologies to identify safety concerns in ten of the city’s high-
And it’s making a difference in Port Moresby, Papua New Guinea, where women organized a market vendor association, and local government invested in improvements to ensure safety and a cleaner working environment.
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I am excited and encouraged every day by the progress I see around me in this area. I know we have a long way to go, but change is happening. I thank you for being here, and I thank you for all you do. I look forward to our conversation today and tomorrow and to our actions for many days to come. Let us work together for freedom and justice for all women and girls.