Developing and Supporting a Thesis

EXERCISE 6.1 Identifying and Revising Thesis Statements That Lack Assertions

EXERCISE 6.1

Identifying and Revising Thesis Statements That Lack Assertions

First, determine which of the following is a statement of fact and which is an assertion. Then revise each statement of fact, making it an assertion that could be an effective thesis statement for a brief (two- to four-page) college writing assignment.

Question 6.29

1. By budgeting time and money, students can avoid stress and enjoy the holidays.

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2. The viewers were moved by pictures of the devastation in the Philippines following Typhoon Haiyan.

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3. Levying a fine on college students who cheat on an assignment might help improve academic integrity.

Question 6.32

4. Taking a class online can be convenient, but succeeding in online classes requires self-discipline and motivation.

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5. As a result of taking care of her family’s dog, Adrian developed a strong desire to rescue abandoned pit bulls.