EXERCISE 6.4
Evaluating Thesis Statements
Identify what is wrong with each of the following thesis statements. Then revise each thesis to make it more effective.
1. In this paper, I will discuss the causes of asthma, which include exposure to smoke, chemicals, and allergic reactions.
2. Jogging is an enjoyable aerobic sport.
3. The crime rate is increasing in U.S. cities.
4. Living in an apartment has many advantages.
5. Children’s toys can be dangerous, instructional, or creative.