1. Word Choice Why did Staples choose the word victim in paragraph 1? What connotations does it have? What images does he create through its use?

2. Fact and Opinion Highlight the facts about what Staples sees during his night walks, and underline his opinions about what he sees. Evaluate the evidence for his interpretations and opinions and consider the following question: Is he also prejudging people?

3. Sources What other kinds of sources might Staples have considered in formulating his views? How would including such sources have changed his essay?

4. Tone Describe the tone of the essay. What effect does the tone have on you as a reader? How effective do you find it?

5. Omissions What information has Staples omitted that would help you further understand his thesis, if any?