FIGURE 9.2 Traditional Paragraphs and a Paragraph List

TRADITIONAL SENTENCE	SENTENCE LIST
We recommend that more work on heat-exchanger performance be done with a larger variety of different fuels at the same temperature, with similar fuels at different temperatures, and with special fuels such as diesel fuel and shale-oil-derived fuels.	We recommend that more work on heat-exchanger performance be done with a larger variety of different fuels at the same temperature with similar fuels at different temperatures with special fuels such as diesel fuel and shale-oil-derived fuels
FIGURE 9.2 A Traditional Sentence and a Sentence List