EXERCISE 11

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EXERCISE 11

Refer to the advice in "Avoid Overly Short Sentences," and combine sentences to create a smoother style.

  • I need a figure on the surrender value of a policy. The number of the policy is A4399827. Can you get me this figure by tomorrow?
  • The supervisor is responsible for processing the outgoing mail. He is also responsible for maintaining and operating the equipment.