EXERCISE 5

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EXERCISE 5

  • How effective is the following letter of appreciation? How could it be improved? Present your findings in a brief memo to your instructor.

    914 Imperial Boulevard

    Durham, NC 27708

    November 13, 2015

    Mr. Ronald O’Shea

    Division Engineering

    Safeway Electronics, Inc.

    Holland, MI 49423

    Dear Mr. O’Shea:

    Thanks very much for showing me around your plant. I hope I was able to convince you that I’m the best person for the job.

    Sincerely yours,

    Robert Harad