We used tree diagrams as an illustration of the categories and levels of Tierney’s classification of reasons. Similarly, writers sometimes integrate graphics to make their classification easy for readers to see at a glance.
Here is an example in which Sharon Begley and Martha Brant explain the abuse of performance-
If doping is, as [the head of IOC’s Medical Commission Prince Alexandre] de Merode noticed, suddenly “an important problem,” it is partly because the newest doping agents pose the risk of serious health problems, and even death. But the larger reason is that it is ridiculously easy to dope and not get caught. Doping and detection are like an arms race. First, trainers discover a performance-
Five types of performance-
Czech tennis pro Petr Korda tested positive for the steroid nandrolone after the Wimbledon quarterfinals last May, for instance. (Protesting that he did not know how the chemicals got into his system, he avoided the one-
EPO is only one weapon in a pharmaceutical arsenal of performance-
Anabolic steroids, almost all of them derivatives of the hormone testosterone, are the mothers of all doping agents. They build muscles. By most estimates, an athlete can improve strength at least 5 percent by taking steroids either orally or through injection during high-
Chart illustrates organizational plan
Drug | What Does It Do? | Masking/Detection | Risks |
Human growth hormone (hGH) | Stimulates the intracellular breakdown of body fat, allowing more to be used for energy. | This is a natural hormone, so added amounts don’t show up in blood or urine tests. | Muscle and bone disfigurement— |
Erythropoietin (EPO) | Increases the number of red blood cells without having to “dope” using one’s own blood. | It’s extremely difficult to detect because the extra blood cells are the athlete’s own. | Extra cells can make blood the consistency of yogurt. This can lead to a clot, heart attack, or stroke. |
Testosterone | Used to build muscles. It lets the body recover quickly from strenuous exercise. | Rules allow up to five times the natural body level, giving athletes latitude. | Unnatural levels can cause heart disease, liver cancer, and impotence. |
Steroids/ androstenedione | Anabolic steroids are incarnations of testosterone; androstenedione is a precursor molecule. | Water- |
Synthetic testosterone carries the same risks as naturally occurring testosterone. |
Stimulants | The first category that the IOC tested for. They delay the symptoms of fatigue. | Stimulants such as amphetamines can be detected; diuretics can dilute them in urine. | Fatigue is the body saying “stop”—overriding that message can be dangerous. |
More and more athletes are turning to the source of all steroids: testosterone itself. Natural levels vary, so sports federations and the IOC try to detect doping indirectly. They measure the relative amounts of testosterone and another natural steroid called epitestosterone. In most people, testosterone levels are no more than twice epi levels. But to allow for individual variation, the IOC set the prohibited level at anything over 6 to 1. That means an athlete can dope himself up to, say, five times his normal testosterone levels, and get away with it. How much of an edge would that provide? A male athlete with a typical testosterone/epitestosterone ratio of 1.3 to 1 could boost that to 6 to 1, stay within the IOC limit and improve his performance at least 10 percent. Women, with a natural ratio of 2.5 to 1, could do even better, since they have less testosterone to begin with and so are more sensitive to added amounts. Testosterone can give women beards, deep voices and tough skin. It can make men’s breasts swell and testicles shrivel.
For more information on designing documents with graphics, see Chapter 32.
The doping agents of choice today are substances that cannot be detected in urine: EPO and human growth hormone. Even though the performance-
— SHARON BEGLEY AND MARTHA BRANT, “The Real Scandal”