A WRITER AT WORK
We draw on Jonathan Potthast’s essay explaining supervolcanoes to demonstrate a sound strategy for integrating sources into your essay, relying on them fully — as you nearly always must do in explanatory writing — and yet making them your own. Most of the information Potthast uses in this passage comes from one article by Joel Achenbach.
Potthast relies on paraphrase and quotation to present the information he borrowed from Achenbach’s article. When you paraphrase, you construct your own sentences, using only specific numbers, names, and key terms from the source (like 45 miles, Lake Butte, and supervolcano). In the following comparison, the sections Potthast paraphrases are highlighted in yellow, the quotations he uses are highlighted in gray, and the key words he borrows are underlined:
Jonathan Potthast | Joel Achenbach |
A dormant supervolcano close to home is in Yellowstone National Park. According to Joel Achenbach, a reporter on science and politics for The Washington Post, three super- It was thought that the volcano was extinct, but activity is making scientists re- |
The last three super- |
Potthast’s writing illustrates a careful use of a source (out of many in his paper) in a paragraph in which he wants to impart dense and important information. He quotes when the material is well presented by Achenbach, and he summarizes or paraphrases factual information. For the material he borrows from Achenbach—