To learn how Akana developed his thesis and responses to objections, turn to A Writer at Work.
THIS EVALUATION ESSAY was written by student William Akana for his composition course. The assignment prompt asked students to choose a film and write a review that includes a close analysis of the cinematic techniques used in at least one important scene. Akana’s instructor illustrated various cinematic techniques, such as camera angles and movements, and demonstrated how to take screen shots, explaining that students can use visuals for a class project without asking permission, but to publish them they would have to get permission, as we did. As you read, consider these questions as well as those in the margin:
How well do the screen shots illustrate Akana’s analysis and support his evaluation?
How would you describe Akana’s tone in this essay? How is his tone affected by the fact that he uses the first person pronoun “I” to refer to himself only in the opening and closing paragraphs?
Basic Features
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An Effective Response to Objections and Alternative Judgments
A Clear, Logical Organization
How appropriate is this narrative and informality for a film review? For a college paper?
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As I leaned back in the movie theater seat, accompanied by my friends on a typical Saturday night, I knew I was in for something special. I was reassured; not only had my friends and I reached a unanimous vote to watch Scott Pilgrim vs. the World, but two of my friends had already seen the film and were eager to see it again. As soon as the film began, with its presentation of the classic Universal Studios introduction in old-
Why do you think Akana gives readers this information?
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Scott Pilgrim vs. the World,released in 2010 by Universal Studios, came into production as a comic book adaptation film under the direction of Edgar Wright (best known for the zombie movie masterpiece Shaun of the Dead). Scott Pilgrim (Michael Cera) is a twenty-
How well does this thesis statement forecast Akana’s argument? Skim the essay, noting where he discusses each of these reasons.
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Scott Pilgrim vs. the World shines bright with superb special effects that serve to reinforce the ideas, themes, and style of the film. Special effects are plentiful throughout the entire film, ranging from superimposed annotations echoing classic gaming features to artful backgrounds and action sequences modeled on colorful comic book pages. For example, each of the main characters is described for the first time with “gamertags,” short-
How well do these details and the illustration he chose support Akana’s claim that the special effects are “inventive” and “superb”?
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Scott Pilgrim vs. the World contains numerous amounts of other fun video-
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Comic book references are also installed using special effects. In almost every battle between Pilgrim and his enemies, comic-
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Another strong point of Scott Pilgrim vs. the World is its clever and humorous dialogue. One memorable scene in the film involves Knives Chau (Ellen Wong) and Scott Pilgrim in an awkward situation where Knives states sheepishly: “I’ve never even kissed a guy.” In a supposedly intimate gesture of affection, Pilgrim moves closer only to pause shortly before saying “Hey . . . me neither.” Additionally, Scott Pilgrim vs. the World is rich in cultural satire that pokes fun at adolescent and young adult behaviors. One scene contains Pilgrim telling Ramona Flowers: “I feel like I’m on drugs when I’m with you, not that I do drugs, unless you do — in which case, I do drugs all the time.” Dialogue like this gives the film a raw yet rich sense of humor that is one of the many inventive risks of the film that pay off.
How do the highlighted transitions help readers follow Akana’s analysis?
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The best attribute by far is the film’s creative cinematography and editing, which can be illustrated in the ultimate fight scene of the movie. Pilgrim finally confronts his former band members, who are playing in an underground lair for Ramona’s seventh evil ex, Gideon (Jason Schwartzman). As Pilgrim admits his faults and proceeds to apologize to the band for former wrongs, the shot assumes a point of view from Pilgrim’s perspective looking up to the band on stage. Shortly before Pilgrim is finished, Gideon, sitting on his throne atop a miniature pyramid, interrupts him. The shot quickly cuts to a close-
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Gideon, in response to the challenge, asks Pilgrim if he is fighting for Ramona, which leads to a climactic epiphany for Pilgrim as he realizes his true motive, admitting in a tight close-
For what purposes does Akana use these sources? How effective is his response to an opposing view?
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This brilliantly executed scene illustrates the artful cinematography of Scott Pilgrim vs. the World. More importantly, it delivers the film’s thematic message, which undercuts the cliché “love conquers all” and instead focuses on the fresh concept that, in the grand scheme of things, the only person you are fighting for is yourself. Some reviewers have criticized the film because they think that in the end it fails as a romantic comedy. For example, Miami Herald film reviewer Rene Rodriguez argues that the film ultimately fails because of the lack of “chemistry” or “emotional involvement” in the romance between Pilgrim and Ramona. But I agree with New York Times reviewer A. O. Scott, who argues that “the movie comes home to the well-
Works Cited
Cozzalio, Dennis. “Scott Pilgrim’s Dreamscape and the Glories of the Wright Stuff II: An Interview with Director Edgar Wright.” Sergio Leone and the Infield Fly Rule, 15 Jan. 2011, sergioleoneifr.blogspot.com/
Lovell, Wesley. Review of Scott Pilgrim vs. The World, directed by Edgar Wright, Cinema Sight, 13 Sept. 2010, www.cinemasight.com/
Rodriguez, Rene. Review of Scott Pilgrim vs. the World, directed by Edgar Wright, Miami Herald, 11 Aug. 2010, www.miami.com/
Scott, A. O. “This Girl Has a Lot of Baggage, and He Must Shoulder the Load,” directed by Edgar Wright, The New York Times, 12 Aug. 2010, nyti.ms/